This is a really cool poem. Did you know you made a Haiku, that's really clever of you. Haikus are all about capturing a little moment and a feeling in a really small space. I think you've done that really well being curious and then the step and after that the '!' (exclamation point) is a nice touch that adds excitement. Great work Max.
I hope you've enjoyed the tasks you've done and have a look at the other fun SLJ activities you might want to try. Looking forward to seeing your next post.
Hey Max,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really cool poem. Did you know you made a Haiku, that's really clever of you. Haikus are all about capturing a little moment and a feeling in a really small space. I think you've done that really well being curious and then the step and after that the '!' (exclamation point) is a nice touch that adds excitement. Great work Max.
I hope you've enjoyed the tasks you've done and have a look at the other fun SLJ activities you might want to try. Looking forward to seeing your next post.
Daniel :D