My writing

Dear Mrs Jain

I am writing to you because I want to change the class time table a little bit. I Believe that making more free time will make the school be a better place. Kids love free time.

Firstly, we should have more free time when we finish our work. It can get boring without free time so kids might not want to come. It will not be fun without free time.

Secondly, we should get free time in the middle of the blocks. It will make school more enjoyable. Some people don't want to go to school.

Lastly, we should get free time at the end of the day. There is not much to do at the end of the day. People might want to play with there friends before the go home.

My conclusion is we should get more free time so kids will love school and they will want to go to school.