I am a student at Papakura Central School, Auckland, NZ.
Hi max This is a good story and I like how you used fractions.I think that you could add some more sentences and make the story bigger.
Hi maxI like how you put a quarter at the end of the story
Hi max
ReplyDeleteThis is a good story and I like how you used fractions.
I think that you could add some more sentences and make the story bigger.
Hi max
ReplyDeleteI like how you put a quarter at the end of the story